Let's begin with my "sorry" - my english is bad, in my mind, 'cause it isn't my mothertongue.
It is beautiful photo with a good concentration on the message of itself. There's a strong contrast in the 3 (maybe 4 if you count the white within) main colours, but also a wonderful harmony within the colours, especially the blue-white tones. The countless waterperls on the glass are giving a simple structure to the photo, which I realles like, because it's not too complicate and at the same time it isn't too simple to look like a little child's drawing.
The message on the white paper can bee seen in several ways. Here in germany think of politics at first, it's something I don't like to think abaout too much. To me it tells that if I don't see a way I can go forth, maybe to reach an aim, then I shall try to think again and search another way to help me through the way I'm going. But there's a question I thought right in the moment I read the words: what is if I want to go the way where nothing is? If I need a moment for myself, with nothing around me, then I would choose the "right path". Well, anyways, this isn't the case that often, and I'm lucky about it^^
To make long sentences short: I realley like this photo, you used a technique which realley excites me, and the massage, the colours and the contrasts/harmonies are great! Thank you to give this gift to so many peoples life's (if they can see this).
An amazing yet simple photo! The message is lighthearted and funny, but serious at the same time, a perfect contrast.
First off, I love the water droplets on the window, as well as the shadows in the background. They give a piece a tad of a gloomy feel, which compliments the "when nothing goes right" message. It instantly draws you in to the red on the note.
I really don't see anything that irks me in this photograph, it would be nice if you could see the shadows in the background a little more clearly, but that probably would've taken away from the message. It can be left up to the imagination to decide what's going on behind the window!
All in all, amazing concept and great photo. Keep at it!
It is beautiful photo with a good concentration on the message of itself. There's a strong contrast in the 3 (maybe 4 if you count the white within) main colours, but also a wonderful harmony within the colours, especially the blue-white tones. The countless waterperls on the glass are giving a simple structure to the photo, which I realles like, because it's not too complicate and at the same time it isn't too simple to look like a little child's drawing.
The message on the white paper can bee seen in several ways. Here in germany think of politics at first, it's something I don't like to think abaout too much. To me it tells that if I don't see a way I can go forth, maybe to reach an aim, then I shall try to think again and search another way to help me through the way I'm going. But there's a question I thought right in the moment I read the words: what is if I want to go the way where nothing is? If I need a moment for myself, with nothing around me, then I would choose the "right path". Well, anyways, this isn't the case that often, and I'm lucky about it^^
To make long sentences short: I realley like this photo, you used a technique which realley excites me, and the massage, the colours and the contrasts/harmonies are great! Thank you to give this gift to so many peoples life's (if they can see this).
First off, I love the water droplets on the window, as well as the shadows in the background. They give a piece a tad of a gloomy feel, which compliments the "when nothing goes right" message. It instantly draws you in to the red on the note.
I really don't see anything that irks me in this photograph, it would be nice if you could see the shadows in the background a little more clearly, but that probably would've taken away from the message. It can be left up to the imagination to decide what's going on behind the window!
All in all, amazing concept and great photo. Keep at it!
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