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Critique by Broskitus Oct 20, 2011, 12:01:06 AM
Hello~ I'm sorry if you don't know me and stuff, but I'm speaking on the behalf of your followers, friends and watchers. I think this picture looks absolutley fantastic!

I'd just like to say that the peice of paper is perfetly in the middle of the snap shot, which is a good key point in order to make it stand out! Alot of photos are casted in this point, great photographers (such as yourself) take great shots like this one when the object is in the centre or if taking a landscape picture somewhere in the scenery.

The grammar is good, there are no spelling mistakes but the punctuation needs a bit of tinkering with. Like instead of a fullstop after work, it'd be better off as a commer. Apart from that little tiny thing, the message sends a nice, clean and clear message to the viewers to not give up after attemping something once.

I really love you're work, the backround is fuzzy and colours blend places, leaving the hand, which is pretty much all shadow but light enough to recognise it as a hand. Then the message sits comfortably and tilted to a side to give it some real touch to it. It's clear and the writing is very neat and clear.

You've done an extremley good job on this! I wish you luck on more of your photos! :)
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This picture is beautiful. I have no artistic values myself so I have to speak on emotions instead of experience.
I'll try to keep it short and simple.
Well, here goes everything. =)

Like the critique before stated, the card is perfectly in the center of it.The message is inspirational and in my opinion the cheery background heightens the inspirational message.It's beautiful penmanship, and the slight tip of the card, gives it the viewer the impression that,the holder of the card had a problem and "Plan A" didn't work. Which allows the viewer a sort of simpathetic connection. But its all just my opinion. Great Job!!

P.S This is my first Critique. So I hope I did it right.
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Canon EOS 500D
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1/166 second
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100 mm
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Oct 19, 2011, 2:55:53 AM
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