I think this is a really cool piece to look at but I feel like there is something missing from it as well. I can't place my finger on it but I definitely think it should be darker. There is to much light. I also think that the key should be more of the darker essense. It should be old and rusted. Maybe even have a skull and cross bones on it. I do however like that bird half of the photo a lot. It shows the depression and los hope your trying to portray. I hope you find my critique helpful. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Have a great day!
I do enjoy the simultaneity in the tones. Although the image on the right should be just a few tones darker. It draws your eyes more to it then having equal for both sides. What interests me the most in how in the right image it looks as if it is hanging from a branch that is in the left image.
This is an interesting technique. It is not an easy one to pull off. I just don't understand the subjects. In the left image it is a bird and in the right it is a set of keys. In my mind they have nothing in common. Other than that this you have done a wonderful job.
TheQueenOfLibertyFeatured By OwnerJun 19, 2012Hobbyist General Artist
Teheheheeh if i wanted to get that close to a bird, i would have to climb the tree and then contort myself in some weird position to even get a somewat close pic. but dont worryy................ive already done that.......