Pros: I love the fact that the background is out of focus, which is further emphasized by the 'fuzzy' glow around the 'sroom'. The use of color is wonderful, you can never go wrong pairing green and red as they complement each other. The bright crisp colors and the addition of the mouth & tongue gives it a fun feel, which is very appropriate considering the origin of the 'character'.
Cons: Maybe it could have been placed better rather than centered, because it kind of feels flat. I think the face was supposed to be the focal point, but my eye goes straight to the white spot which feels centered on the head and is also very bright compared to the face. You could dull the color of the white or shift it so that the bright white spot no longer feels centered detracting attention away from the face.
Overall: I liked this piece for its bright crisp color and it's fun nature. It ties in with the game world because of it. There are just a few things that I feel that it needs in order to be an even better piece.
I was wondering if you were ever going to do any more super shroom deviants, and this one definitely does not disappoint. The concept is great, everything is bright and lively, I can picture this being displayed as a desktop wallpaper. What I like most about this piece though, is this super shroom actually has a mouth, which I don't see very often unless it's Toad, but he isn't a super shroom anyway. My only complaint would be to make area around the super shroom a little more sharper and not so fuzzy, I feel like it's a bit too soft for my taste. I've seen your work and you are excellent at capturing vibrant colors in good quality, I want to see more of that. It's another super shroom picture, which I see rather often, but I'm glad you did it in a unique way. Overall, while I can't give this piece a perfect score because there are so many super shroom pictures, you did a great job capturing a popular image in the Mario universe. It's colorful, cute, and fun to look at!
I love the fact that the background is out of focus, which is further emphasized by the 'fuzzy' glow around the 'sroom'. The use of color is wonderful, you can never go wrong pairing green and red as they complement each other. The bright crisp colors and the addition of the mouth & tongue gives it a fun feel, which is very appropriate considering the origin of the 'character'.
Cons:
Maybe it could have been placed better rather than centered, because it kind of feels flat. I think the face was supposed to be the focal point, but my eye goes straight to the white spot which feels centered on the head and is also very bright compared to the face. You could dull the color of the white or shift it so that the bright white spot no longer feels centered detracting attention away from the face.
Overall:
I liked this piece for its bright crisp color and it's fun nature. It ties in with the game world because of it. There are just a few things that I feel that it needs in order to be an even better piece.
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