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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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If I were to suggest improvement, I would say reduce the importance of the center of the flower through darkening it or making it more out of focus. Right now you could argue the focal point is either the droplet or the very detailed middle of the flower, and my eye keeps bouncing between them, trying to decide which is more important in the composition. To see what I mean, put your hand over the middle of flower, and the droplet pops out. Take your hand away, and the uncertainty returns.
One more thing I do like is the repeated use of circles here: in the blurry lights, in the droplet, in the overall shape of the flower and in the flower center. The repeated variations of the same shape help tie it all together.
Overall, beautiful work! Nice job.
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