I really like this picture and the concept that it brings! You did great on focussing on the note, but I think that it needs a different background that supports it. I feel that the note and the words are just kind of there, but there isn't a real story behind it to believe it. I also like that it brings out a little bit of mystery and suspiciousness to the word. Overall, I like your idea and concept, and it really puts out a new meaning and idea. Great job with this picture, I can see that you're a great photographer!
I guess it's pretty cool but the same thing has been done a countless amount of times. A simple deviant art search of 'believe lie' shows a countless amount of deviants that use the exact same wordplay. The technique is done quite well although it is certainly not unique. No matter how much I look at the background I still can't tell what's going on, which maybe is the point, but I don't see how it adds anything significant to the overall picture. The rest of the deviant merely consists of average looking handwriting with the unoriginal words. There isn't much to this deviant that sets it apart from any of the others with the same words. The idea of writing it down and taking a picture of it separates it a bit, although the technique is very common.