i think this is a beautiful quote. to lie is having someone belive falce things, which is very true. honestly, i think this was a very good picture, and i wait for many more. the way you wrote it, makes it seem so innoceent, as if a child is writing it, i think that is what makes the picture the way it is, had you wrote it any other way, it wouldnt have the same outcome. the background has me a bit confused so im thinking that maybe there is something going on in the background that pertains to this, although im not quite sure about that.
Nice focus and a very clean writing. The Camera is well used. Time spent on it. It gives an impact on reader who never thought of this.
But i found it a bit plain. I have seen nearly the same pic on the front page, but with a colder effects used instead of warm effects on your picture. There were water droplets behind it.
But to be honest "BELIEVE" is not that surprising anymore. A poetry even would work with the word. Or a good typography could be used. Even some picture could be added. But just pointing it out makes it quite unoriginal.
I see you worked on this pic with the least amount of flaws for an eye. But also a person must see your effords at first look. And say "it's a genuis idea".
Those are told to an artist who worked well and asked for a critique. If it was a personal experience to try this idea, you've done well.
honestly, i think this was a very good picture, and i wait for many more. the way you wrote it, makes it seem so innoceent, as if a child is writing it, i think that is what makes the picture the way it is, had you wrote it any other way, it wouldnt have the same outcome. the background has me a bit confused so im thinking that maybe there is something going on in the background that pertains to this, although im not quite sure about that.
But i found it a bit plain. I have seen nearly the same pic on the front page, but with a colder effects used instead of warm effects on your picture. There were water droplets behind it.
But to be honest "BELIEVE" is not that surprising anymore. A poetry even would work with the word. Or a good typography could be used. Even some picture could be added. But just pointing it out makes it quite unoriginal.
I see you worked on this pic with the least amount of flaws for an eye. But also a person must see your effords at first look. And say "it's a genuis idea".
Those are told to an artist who worked well and asked for a critique. If it was a personal experience to try this idea, you've done well.
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